Examples of Common Writing Errors
| Sentence Structure | Fragments | Because he is here Monday. Supervisor waiting main office. |
|---|---|---|
| Run-on sentences | Come to the shop we have a sale. He came to the meeting he brought the report. | |
| Comma splices | Gustavo wrote the customer a letter, Catalina mailed it. | |
| Mechanical | Misspelled words | detrimentel instead of detrimental |
| Incorrect or missing punctuation | dont Aren't you going to go. | |
| Extra capitalization (or none) | she called the secretary about the Meeting. | |
| Grammatical | Incorrect verb tenses | Yesterday she work on the budget. |
| Shifts in tense | He dropped off the letter and drops the package. She hired John and hires Maria. | |
| Incorrect subject-verb agreement | Rajni and her supervisor is going to training. | |
| Unclear pronoun references | I listened to Robert's and Bill's ideas and I liked his better. | |
| Missing words | Mary vacation. | |
| Word Usage | Improper word choices Use of symbols not appropriate for a business setting |
cause instead of because; too instead of to & instead of and; + instead of plus |
| Tone/Language | Rude, slang, or casual language not appropriate for a business setting/not consistent with standard business English | Please exercise good judgment when extending credit. We do not want to be ripped off. |
| Style | Sentences may be awkward, repetitive, and/or choppy with little or no variety. Response may read like a list. | The clock has been repaired. It can be picked up. The repair shop is closed on Sunday. It can be picked up any other day. |
| Organization | Illogical grouping of information | The details in the message may not be grouped together logically; e.g., the first name of a person may be at the start of the message and the last name may be at the end. |
| Incorrect or simple transitions | The transitions are often incorrect: He said he left early to get to the meeting on time so he arrived late instead of ...but he arrived late. The transitions may be simple: but, also |
